That is the question.
I am jamming all the chapters of my Penny Redlin series into a book form that I’m going to rewrite, add to, or something. – Here’s the first chapter, if your interested. Karma is Electric – Ch1 (Violent story w/rough language)
And as the link above says, there is some salty language therein. My question is how much do publishers and other non-blog sites care that there is bad language. I could change it all to be PG13 but really, in the first chapter (spoiler alert) there is a violent almost rape and then defensive killing. I mean would it really change my audience to cut out the foul language. Yeah your kids shouldn’t be reading it. I don’t feel I over use the words. They’re just sprinkled in for a spicy sentence sandwich. As Spongebob calls them, sentence enhancers. Please, let me know your opinions????