Firmly bound, snug and tight.
Anticipating, a sting so slight.
Warming, acending pain to its peak.
Agonizing beauty there to seek.
Wayward floating petals of grace.
Grounded, pinned, made complete again.
Random Thoughts, Stories, and Poetry
Firmly bound, snug and tight.
Anticipating, a sting so slight.
Warming, acending pain to its peak.
Agonizing beauty there to seek.
Wayward floating petals of grace.
Grounded, pinned, made complete again.
Poetry is a niche I’ve never properly managed to slip into. I did used to write them under the moniker/alter ego Edwin Saxton, but they were stupid. Like really daft. A chance for me to get in touch with my insane side. I might have to give it a go sometime
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Now I’m curious. Lol
Daft, insane poetry could be intriguing.
I like poems because they’re like word puzzles and sometimes they sound pretty and actually make sense too.
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I agree. My favourite poem is Sir Walter Scott’s ‘The Wretch’. I love the language used throughout
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I just Googled the wretch, as I was unfamiliar. It is beautifully written, of course. I would never be able to pull one of those out of my brain. I actually never wrote a poem before the ones on here. I just decided to try one day as a fun challenge.
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It was actually thanks to the movie Groundhog Day that I know that poem. I couldn’t pull anything like that out myself. But I may have to give it a go sometime
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I love the imagery you used in this one, Kira.
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To tell the truth, it started out as a poem about BDSM. Hahaha
Thank you so much!
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I caught that. Like I said, loved the imagery. 😉
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Realy, I didn’t think anyone would pick up on it. Cool, I’m glad.
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From beginning to end. Whether or not you intended it to sound that way when you were done, it still did. More so, when read aloud.
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Great! It’s nice when things turn out better than you thought. 😀
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I like this, simple yet thought provoking and beautiful.
Poetry is something I’ve never been able to do, it amazes me when i come across something like this
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I’m glad you liked it! Poems are my cheat for the days I’m too busy to write storys. LoL.
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Hahahaha that’s fair. I wouldn’t even have the first clue where to start on one, I’ll stick to stories. Oh came up with an idea for a new book today 😁
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Awesome! Do I have to wait for something to come out or do I get to hear it?
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you i’ll tell you :p
this is a very rough idea but here it is
Eric is an officer in the police, he works as a homicide detective and has done for five years, when he turned twenty-five his life was changed forever, after the death of his mother he inherited the family business, Hunting.
His mother was killed in a car accident, and he never thought that it would change him so drastically. Losing a parent is hard enough, but after her death, he started to see things that he never could before; bringing new light to the vicious murders that he investigates.
In our world, there is a violent sub-culture that is warring against humanity looking to make their way back to the top of the food chain and reclaim their place at the top.
Because what the world doesn’t know is that the Dinosaurs never went extinct, the evolved and now they are missing a come back to be on top
Only Eric and a few others like him can stand in their way, and they know it, they will stop at nothing to destroy The Slayers
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Now that sounds interesting. I would be curious to see the explanations of how they evolved and such. So yes, I like it.
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Yeah it just came to me today i was thinking about the T-Rex skull i bought and it came to me.
I have no idea how that happened ill need to figure it out will be an interesting idea to go with i think
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Sounds like you’ll have a lot of fun using your imagination.☺
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Hope so, just hope it flows and i dont get bored with it
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I hear that! But if something is book length, it’s almost a given that you’ll get bored some time. I know I do. Not stopping when it gets to that point is something I’m trying to work on right now.
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Yeah, i know the feeling. although i didn’t get that with the first book i wrote.
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