I skip and play freely, not a care in the world. I see you.
I hold your hands to spin in our game. I like you.
I strut by in my budding sexuality. Only for you.
I step to your side, our vows genuine and true. Forever with you.
I waddle heavy with child, our family’s begun. Stronger by you.
I crawl in despair, you’ve gone too soon. Why you?
I walk proudly alone, knowing what we’ve built. I miss you.
I shuffle along, events coming to an end. I’ll be with you.
Soon….
An entire life of love, hurt pain and family in eight lines. Very impressive, this is really heartfelt and anyone can relate to it.
Reminded me of the first nine munites of Up
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Oh yes, I didn’t even think of that. It is similar. It was meant to be nice and uplifting, but life doesn’t generally come to a end with out some pain.
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It is very Up, but thats a good thing. Great film one of only 5 to make me cry.
It is uplifting but like you said life always involves pain. It’s how we know we are alive.
Only the dead feel no pain
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Very true!😊
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Keep it up
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I will! It’s what’s keeping me sane these days. Lol
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hahaha, i know that feeling well
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At least I use something healthy ish. I say ish because it does give me a reason to sit on my bum for a good chunk of the day. Lol
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I kind of wish i could do that. At the moment, at home, anytime i pick up my laptop the little one starts crying. no time to write its a strugle
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I hear that, you may have to just try using the mobile app. Writing with one thumb. 👍
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Thats exactly what ive been doing :p
i have the Word app on my phone so thats getting used a lot, got to have the spell check :p
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Well I’m glad your at least able to keep with it. 😆
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Yeah, i sit there phone in one hand baby in the other it makes it a challenge
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I can imagine!
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Suitably depressed, I shall now go and turn the oven on and bake my head 😂 Powerful words. I’d love to know how they come to you so seemingly effortlessly
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Hahahaha, don’t do it Paul. You’ll singe your eyebrows off. 🙂
Thank you Sir, I have no clue where I pull them from.
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A magic hat? (Doing my damndest not to say the obvious…)
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Maybe an asshat. Hahahaha!
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A combination of both things. You see! You’re the quintessential wordsmith!
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The princess of profanity! Lol
Your the king though. Hahaha
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I prefer to be referred to as High Chief
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Yes! Of course, High Chief Potty Mouth! 👑
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High Chief Foul-Mouthed Bastard actually
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I like mine better.😛😉
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Well you smell so nerrrrrrrrr…
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Oh burn… 😒
Jk hahaha
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I figured a childish argument might be fun. Poo-poo head!
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On first reading I thought this was terribly sad but on second thoughts/reading the first five lines are upbeat and wonderful… It all hinges on the sixth line and the ages involved. The accompanying image suggests a longer life spent together and the hope at the end of reconciliation so perhaps not quite so sad. What isn’t in doubt is the quality. Nice play, Kira, great writing 🙂
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